It was a cold windy day..
I was all alone walking by the bay...
I had nothing to think but one...
I really had hurt someone...
It rained all night the day she left
The sun so hot; that i froze to death..
I cried 'n' cried when she parted...
I never guessed she was hard hearted....
I really had hurt my love....
Hid my face deep in the sand..
And covered it with my hand,,
How could i breathe the air around,
Which never carried her sound....
-fzl
5 comments:
the sun so HOT, that i FROZE to death???
I meant... though the sun was so hot... the guilt was so intense... that i froze to death, in spite of the heat ;)
misuse of poetic license :P
Its a poets imagination and his personification...
There is no misuse... the licensing terms are flexible :p
by the way.. i liked the way you put it....
"Misuse of poetic license..."
thanks for that :p
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